Shower

[cybra2003.livejournal.com]

Title: Shower
Author: Cybra
Word Count: 1,022
Rating: Adult
Warnings: Undressing!sex and shower!sex. Oh, and a weird kinda threesome.
Author's Note: While I’m trying to make the murder weapon/murderer in my other fic not as blinking obvious, marvel at my creatively-titled pr0n my sister insisted I write. (I’m converting her to our side. One of us…) And it’s, as my sister and I call it, the “Neapolitan Ship”. The premise is simple: the three are all attending Tokyo University with Shinichi renting them rooms in his huge mystery nerd house. That is all the backstory you need to know.
Summary: Shinichi has a rough day. Heiji and Kaito make it better.

If Heiji's chocolate and Kaito's vanilla, doesn't that make Shinichi strawberry?

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Comments

Really?

[nataeiy1.livejournal.com]

I thought Kaito is chocolate...

Re: Really?

[cybra2003.livejournal.com]

Random cut text came from conversations with my sister. Kaito was made vanilla 'cause of his Kid outfit. Heiji became chocolate because of his sexy tan.

We're dorks, I know.

[canis-lupus03.livejournal.com]

I love you. I seriously do. And here I thought I was the only one with a serious kink for that particular threesome... *^^* Thanks for writing! There is not enough porn in this fandom, *^^*
Cheers, Lupus!

[cybra2003.livejournal.com]

Glad you liked it. ^^ My sister pointed out how awesome a threesome with them would be. And this is either my second or third time writing porn, so I'm glad it doesn't suck. o.o Writing porn is hard.

[canis-lupus03.livejournal.com]

I was just thinking about possible pieces of fanfiction to write, and then the boys decided that they'd like to have a threesome... ?? Wasn't my idea! *^^*
Well, it's certainly very hot for a second or third time writing porn! *fans self*
One thing, maybe: you could use names and personal pronouns more often... I know they teach you in school not to repeat things (at least, they taught us that...), but if you go to too much trouble to avoid using a name, you soon end up sounding convoluted and unnatural... for example, "Tokyo-born detective"... I'd just say Shinichi... *^^* Well, it might only be my taste, so it's of course completely up to you to ignore this! Anyway, I hope you write more porn, *^^* Especially threesome porn...