Title: Shower
Author: Cybra
Word Count: 1,022
Rating: Adult
Warnings: Undressing!sex and shower!sex. Oh, and a weird kinda threesome.
Author's Note: While I’m trying to make the murder weapon/murderer in my other fic not as blinking obvious, marvel at my creatively-titled pr0n my sister insisted I write. (I’m converting her to our side. One of us…) And it’s, as my sister and I call it, the “Neapolitan Ship”. The premise is simple: the three are all attending Tokyo University with Shinichi renting them rooms in his huge mystery nerd house. That is all the backstory you need to know.
Summary: Shinichi has a rough day. Heiji and Kaito make it better.
If Heiji's chocolate and Kaito's vanilla, doesn't that make Shinichi strawberry?
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Author: Cybra
Word Count: 1,022
Rating: Adult
Warnings: Undressing!sex and shower!sex. Oh, and a weird kinda threesome.
Author's Note: While I’m trying to make the murder weapon/murderer in my other fic not as blinking obvious, marvel at my creatively-titled pr0n my sister insisted I write. (I’m converting her to our side. One of us…) And it’s, as my sister and I call it, the “Neapolitan Ship”. The premise is simple: the three are all attending Tokyo University with Shinichi renting them rooms in his huge mystery nerd house. That is all the backstory you need to know.
Summary: Shinichi has a rough day. Heiji and Kaito make it better.
If Heiji's chocolate and Kaito's vanilla, doesn't that make Shinichi strawberry?
Really?
Date: 2009-05-21 02:42 am (UTC)Re: Really?
Date: 2009-05-22 12:19 am (UTC)We're dorks, I know.
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Date: 2009-05-21 06:10 pm (UTC)Cheers, Lupus!
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Date: 2009-05-22 12:16 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-05-22 02:24 pm (UTC)Well, it's certainly very hot for a second or third time writing porn! *fans self*
One thing, maybe: you could use names and personal pronouns more often... I know they teach you in school not to repeat things (at least, they taught us that...), but if you go to too much trouble to avoid using a name, you soon end up sounding convoluted and unnatural... for example, "Tokyo-born detective"... I'd just say Shinichi... *^^* Well, it might only be my taste, so it's of course completely up to you to ignore this! Anyway, I hope you write more porn, *^^* Especially threesome porn...