Screenshot 1: Hiccups

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Title: Hiccups
Author: splishims
Rating: G? If I'm wrong and need to change it, please tell me so I can do so.
Pairing: Kaitou Kid/ Kudou Shinichi
Disclaimer: I do not own Detective Conan or Magic Kaito.

First time posting to a community, hope everything works right. ^_^

(I'm taking a page from some of my favorite fanfiction authors' books and starting a collection of various oneshots and such. It will be titled Screenshots of Life, and this is the first one.)

 

A/N: Apologies to anyone reading this who’s been waiting for another chapter of Silence. I’ve kinda hit a brick wall for that one, but I’m working on chiseling away at it. Sorry it’s taking so long.

Anyway, I got the hiccups last night and this just popped into my head and demanded to be written. It’s my first KaiShin ever, and my first kissing scene. So if you could please leave any pointers and such for improving my writing, I would be very appreciative. Thanks!

Screenshot 1: Hiccups

Kaitou Kid stood at the edge of the roof, his back facing the stairwell door as he waited for his unshrunken favorite detective. He’d placed enough traps to be sure it would be Shinichi to make it to the top, not Hakuba or Nakamori-keibu. The thief was not disappointed as his well trained hearing picked up the muffles and quick but wary footsteps heading up the stairs. But there was another noise with the footfalls, also muffled by the thick metal door.

Kid cocked his head only slightly, a mere quarter of an inch, in confusion. The position also allowed the thief a better chance to listen, his right ear now angled to catch softer noises. The door was finally wrenched open, leaving a panting, irritated Shinichi in the frame. Kid turned slowly, taking in the detective’s appearance as he wracked his brain, trying to figure out why Shinichi looked so annoyed. It couldn’t be the Kid, he’d done far worse in the past than he had tonight, and the detective hadn’t been upset then. So why?

His thought process was interrupted when Shinichi’s shoulders gave a violent jerk and a high-pitched squeak escaped the detective’s throat. Shinichi looked mortified by the outburst, if the red on his cheeks and the hand covering his mouth as if to prevent any more traitorous noises from passing were anything to go by, and Kid couldn’t suppress a chuckle.

Shinichi’s eyes narrowed. “Problem, Kid?” he asked, letting his hand fall back to his side. The seriousness in his tone would have had more effect, had his shoulders not jerked again as another squawk left his mouth.

“I think I should be asking you that,” Kid replied smoothly. “After all, it seems you’re the one suffering a case of the hiccups.”

The detective’s face reddened further, his shoulders jumping as his diaphragm spasmed yet again, another hiccup jolting his frame. “Your point?”

“Have you tried to get rid of them?”

“Of course,” Shinichi answered, glaring. “I’ve tried everything I could think of.” Another jerk, another squeak.

“Everything?” Kid echoed, starting toward the detective.

Shinichi crossed his arm, eyeing the thief suspiciously. “Yes, everything.”

“I bet I know something you haven’t tried.” He stopped in front of Shinichi, eyes shining.

A look of confusion was all the invite Kid needed, and he swiftly captured Shinichi’s lips with his own. The detective gasped, his mouth opening slightly, and Kid took the opportunity that was presented to him, letting his tongue explore a bit before pulling away from the stunned detective.

“What the hell was that?” Shinichi’s voice was low and slightly dumbfounded, just as Kid had expected.

“A kiss, of course,” the thief chirped happily.

“I know that!” There was a pause. “I mean, why?”

Kaitou Kid chuckled, turning away from Shinichi and taking a few steps. “You’re the detective,” he said finally. “On a side note though, your hiccups are gone, aren’t they?”

And with that the thief was gone, leaving a wide-eyed Shinichi alone on the rooftop.

Comments

[blackdragonfox.livejournal.com]

awww, that was cute... the kiss was light, but that made it more real...ironically, when i first started reading this, i was hicuping, and my hicups are high pitched too, so it was kinda creapy, yet so funny! just the fluff i needed before sleep! *heart*

[splishims.livejournal.com]

Thanks! ^_^

Wow, that /is/ kinda weird... Did your hiccups go away soon though?

[ceirwy.livejournal.com]

A little predictable but boy did I still enjoy it XD

[splishims.livejournal.com]

I'm glad you enjoyed it! ^_^

[vampslyr.livejournal.com]

[Snicker] Poor Shinichi. That was awesome.

[splishims.livejournal.com]

Hehe, thanks! Glad you liked it. ^_^

[bakathief.livejournal.com]

I bet Shinichi can't wait for the next time he get hiccups x) Really nice, like your writing style. x3

[splishims.livejournal.com]

Thanks! ^^ I'm pretty sure you're right! XP ... Now I wanna write a sequel~ After I get some studying done though... College sucks in the time aspect... >.