Should I or Should I not?

[tabby2014.livejournal.com]

Title: Detective Magic/ Detectives and Magicians
Author: tabby2014
Fandom: MK/DC
Pairing: A surprise if I continue
A/N: This is a plunnie that attacked me and would not let go. It is an AU it also has a new character. Enjoy~!

mahou-magic

Prologue

I need to quite being so nervous. Kaito thought. I mean, yes this is my first heist and all. Lets just hope it goes well.

The lights suddenly went out and a blast of pink smoke covered the room. "Ladies and Gentlemen~!" Kid shouted. Show time! Kaito then used his scarfs and tried to catch and tie Kid up. Kid dodges easily and turned towards him.

"Well you're new. Hmm, Tantei-mahou."

Then the chase began.

A/N: I did this on the spot when it attacked.Tell me what you think and if anyone would like to beta please~!

Comments

[katty008.livejournal.com]

Ooh, Kaito trying to catch an unknown Kid. I like it. Kind of surprised no one else has tried it yet now.

[tabby2014.livejournal.com]

Now that you think about it... yeah it is a surprise that nobody else thought of it.(Considering what else you guys come up with, not that I mind I love most of the posts here.) And Thanks for commenting! Think I should continue?

[katty008.livejournal.com]

(Yeah, this is not half as crazy as most of the stuff I write. This actually makes sense.) Definitely continue.

I'll think about it.

[tabby2014.livejournal.com]

Well I am glad to hear you would like me to continue, but I will wait a week to see reaction. Till then this plunnie I will IGNORE.(Hopefully...Eh hehe..

[(Anonymous)]

scrafes = scarfs ?

[tabby2014.livejournal.com]

Yes, sorry I missed spelled that. Thanks for the heads up I'll fix that.

[olivetheolive.livejournal.com]

Anon, you mean "scarves".

[olivetheolive.livejournal.com]

Nevermind, looked it up and both are okay, apparently.

[olivetheolive.livejournal.com]

This is an awesome idea! I like it.
But it's way too short. I'll like it more if you write more.
And I'll love it if you pick a tense and stick to it.

Let me think.

[tabby2014.livejournal.com]

I am currently writing chapter 1 (well was going to) but I would like to know what a tense is. Thanks

Re: Let me think.

[olivetheolive.livejournal.com]

A tense is a form of a verb. Like past tense or present tense. I was referring to the fact that Kid "dodges" when he probably should have "dodged".

Re: Let me think.

[tabby2014.livejournal.com]

Oh, I was thinking this was some author term NOT grammar. Oh well will write chapter 1 now.